I'll grant there are some funny lines and name drops in there, but...
This effort just has way too much effort. It comes across like an eager kid that has waited a life time to drive the truck, his dad finally, reluctantly gave in, and the kid drive straight into the apple tree in his eagerness to show how ready he was.
Sorry buddy but you're not ready. Some kids drive competently at 16, and some are better off sticking to the riding mower for a couple of years. You can try the mower next year.
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